Wednesday, November 25, 2009

HW 25

Part 1
Dear Moe
I like how straight forward you were in portraying what type of cool your character represents. It seems like he tries too hard to be "cool" that in the end he finds himself dealing with bigger consequences.

Dear Jin Is this the type of person you admire? haha just kidding. Its a really short story, but its compact and is full of aspects that most of us find to be cool. I especially like the "Everyone wants to fuck me", it directly shows how self-centered he is, and I guess having confidence is a part of being cool.

Dear Brandon
I like how you constructed your story. The kid feels the urge to be cool at first, but ends up finding out that being himself is the best way to go. Your story also really degrades the meaning of cool, it seems like your trying to show that being cool is not as important as we think it is.

Dear Kevin
I guess your character is trying to illustrate the "Fuck It" type of cool? I'm kind of confused by the the whole Matrix metaphor, but it may be because I haven't really watched it enough times. I actually can connect to this. I used to be like that, but I started to prioritize things in life, and people don't consider you to be cool later in life if you arent well educated, unless your famous.

Dear Charlse
I like how you made the character in your story materialistic. Wealth is big when you want to be cool, no matter how old you are. I like how ignorant you made the character look in a matter of minutes in the Gucci store.

Part 2

I saw so many varities of cool in the stories I read, but wealth and reputation were two topics that seemed to stand out to most of us. For example both Jin and Charles's stories the protagonist was illustrated to have the element of wealth that made them admirable to others. In a world where the rich have a wider availability to have access to things make them a role model. Though not everyone believes wealth to be the number one priority in being cool, that also depends on the community of people the individual belongs in.
The reputation gained from wealth really is a one sided thing. Many people admire the rich, but almost no one admires the poor. This proves that the limitations set by being poor does not enhance how someone is viewed, it simply puts them in a position where they are looked down upon. Though in some cases, people who have become something big while living under poor circumstances are praised much higher than those that have had wealth their whole life. But it is much harder for those types of people to stand out in the world.



HW 24 Short Story

Smoke fills the room, as the TV shines brightly everyone stares consumed in the hilarity of Family Guy. "Yo this shit is hilarious" says George in a low stoned voice, as the room fills with laughter one boy, Timmy, finds himself looking all over the place feeling paranoid and uncomftorable with the situation he is in. Nothing seems to be going right, he is trying to comprehend why the other kids, or his so called friends whom he admires so much can stay so relaxed. "I feel sick guys" he states pathetically, everyone laughs and jokes that he's "buggin out". Feeling embarassed, he tries his best to reassure everyone that he's having a good time. "No, I'm just kidding you..." Its hard to talk, staying alert makes him naucious, he wants it to end.
He wakes up moments later. Everyone has abandoned him. "what time is it? where did everyone go?". He sits there knowing that he failed to impress the "cool" kids.

Monday, November 16, 2009

HW 23 "Cool"

As simple as the word "cool" seems to be, I find it to represent a variety of things. There are so many fields that "cool" can branch off into, including music, fashion, personalities, etc. There are no short cuts or simple routes to observe this new topic as a broad picture. It also is mainly an opinion, every individual has a specific image or idea that creates a montage of mental images that represent what "cool" really is. 

Overall, I find this unit to be a very sensitive topic, knowing that people obviously want to portray a cool image, genuine feelings towards it can alternate depending on how much the person cares about his/her reputation. Especially in such a small New York public school, I find it to be very difficult for me as for others to reveal their insight. There will be such a slim variety of opinions concerning the topic that we will end up repeating ourselves time and time again, possibly more times than the Digital Unit. I don't necessarily want to bash the idea of this unit, but I certainly don't find the environment we discuss the topic in to be confidential enough for people to have an open mind about it. 

On the flip-side, I'm very interested in how many people actually realize the way we react to the stereotypes of being cool. I'm looking forward to how deep we can get into this topic, until we end up trying to redeem our reputation by approaching the unit in a way that wont disrupt how we triumph in the community of teenagers. Since in the end, cool isn't determined by your own opinion, but how others around you react to it. Like how Andy said, there are many categorize that "cool" is incorporated into, even the most unique individual will eventually find a group of people with similar interests which eventually results in the person adopting features that are "cool" in his/her community. People try to be original, not knowing that they really are not.  


HW 22

Digitalization is Inevitable

By Amon Ito

 

Technological advancement has been occurring ever since the day a caveman invented a wooden spear. These advancements made life easier, and over time branched off into something we call digitalization. In many cases digitalization is not a problem for countries that lack the money or have not yet hoped on the bandwagon of individuals that enjoy high definition television or first person shooters on some video game console. People observe third-world countries and their standards of living with disgust or pity, but in certain fields we lack the feats to survive. The value of using our five senses to perceive things such as nature and its beauty is decreasing, and the experience of physical interaction is starting to become a burden for some. We are beginning to favor quantity over quality, as seen most often on networking sites such as Facebook or Myspace. So how do we start creating a much stronger bond with reality? I don’t believe that option is available for us anymore. If by any chance we take away the element of technology from our lives, people will become confused and insecure of their situation therefore the advancements must be promoted as it enhances our daily life and keeps us sane. Becoming reliant is a very hazardous route since it requires absolute trust, and we have come to a point where digital technology keeps us alive. The more useful they become the more we utilize, expecting them to be under the control of the human user at all times, and we continue to overlook the fact that electronics do have flaws. They are not tools that can satisfy a person forever, and when they do become advanced enough to gratify our every need, we no longer have control of our physical self and the machines control us.Digitalization is inevitable and will consume a majority of the world with waves of technological advancement. Factual interactions will be substituted by digital representations, diminishing the value of physical interactions.

 

            Alongside the process of evolution, advancement in human intelligence happens. Though we have come to a point where we have not yet shown any physical alterations we surely have grown mentally over the years. Technology is a very accurate way to prove our mental growth ever since we actually became a human. Simple equipment to protect each other such as spears and knives made of wood and stone have become deadly firearms that can instantly pierce through the human flesh. The pace in which we are advancing reassures us that upgraded versions of digital technology will be invented one after another as we tear down boundaries and limitations, but how will the physical body react to this? Even giant industries that make mass amounts of their products to distribute to all the consumers started out as a form of physical labor where physical interaction was necessary, but now factories are mainly run by machines that are capable of working much faster than any man. With this type of mass production, we find ourselves lacking natural resources to compensate for the amount produced and we begin to see a significant decrease in quality and effort put into the construction.

 We see this in most fast food restaurants such as McDonalds and Wendy’s. Starting off as a top quality burger joint, we find ourselves purchasing French fries that consist of chemicals to make it taste like French fries. A McDonald's French fry is one of countless foods whose flavor is just a component in a complex manufacturing process” (Fast Food Nation) The results of over using machines has overwhelmed us with comfort and ease of sitting back and watching mindless programmed electronics do work. Since we started utilizing these machineries, characteristics like laziness in humans began to increase. Before we started relying on machines, being lazy was not an option for survival. Before meals were cooked in microwaves, we were required to endure the daily activity of hunting and cooking just to stay alive. We treasured even the smallest portions of food and valued life more than ever. Now that are standards of daily life have been set to the digital way of life, we live behind barriers and digital representations.

            Though I speak of this digitalization like we are attempting to live life the wrong way, I know that it is also inevitable. After being able to put our hands on an opportunity like digital technology, we will continue to grow.

           

            The emotional aspect while absorbed in the digital world is easily disregarded since the individual’s perspective is switched to the character on the screen. This feeling is called disembodiment, where the individual feels as if they are not inside their body but viewing the world through another person or a digital representation. Knowing how easily we can become entertained by digital technology also shows how vulnerable we are to these machines. “Games like Medal of Honor from WWII, give you "strong feelings of determination, rage, valor, patriotism, and strength because you feel like you are actually serving on the front lines for something you believe in." (Emotions in Videogames). The individual playing the first person shooter Call of Duty genuinely feels as if he is at war. The way videogames manipulate your state of mentality illustrates how deeply it affects our every day life.

            The body cannot live without the mind. Having opinions and judgments are what makes us human, and our ability to evaluate our surroundings help us interact with one another. Imagine a game that manipulates your whole body, similar to The Matrix where the characters “jack in” into the “matrix”, a computer world. If a digital world can control the way we think and feel, it probably will advance enough to make us feel satisfied. Though a life where everything you need or want is brought to you in the matter of seconds would be like a dream come true, there most definitely is a flipside to it. Studies show that the production of technology, which has the capability to interact with our thoughts directly, is being constructed. “Thanks to the rapid pace of research on the BMI, one day these and other individuals may be able to feed themselves with a robotic arm and hand that moves according to their mental commands” (Science Daily). Many significant aspects of the human body are connected to the brain, making that particular organ much more valuable than others. But balance is key in order to maintain a fit both mentally and physically. The easier it is to access and utilize a piece of technology the more we abuse it resulting in less physical labor.

           

            The element of change has a deep impact on the growth of the digital life as well. Change stimulates our mind, as we tend to become unsatisfied with things easily. We demand new things, and this is what keeps companies like Apple busy researching upgrades. The way we hunger for bigger and better things makes the process of reducing the use of technology impossible, and the advancement of technology inevitable. It is in our nature to create new things and as we become smarter little by little, we are mainly becoming smarter in fields that consist of something digital. Video-games these days are open for all ages, whether the player is a young child or a grown man, the gaming industry have made a wide range of games to fit everyone’s needs.  But the amount is not enough to satisfy people for more than couple months.

            The gaming industry is pressured by time due to a high demand in a unique video game, something that no one has ever played. A very big topic that most game designers focus on is the difference between the prequel and the sequel of a game. They capture the consumer’s attention by allowing them to view things that were not possible before, dramatizing how much the two games are different while complimenting the sequel. As long as we have the craving for change, digitalization will prolong.

 

            The invention of these various digital equipment have arguably made our lives easier in terms of communication, social networking, etc. but where do we draw the line? Or will we even be capable of stopping this constant progression? We have ventured deep enough with digitalization to sit back and observe our situation, but nothing can be done to stop it. Most interactions done digitally are mental, drastically lowering the significance of the physical being. Our natural reaction to change and the way we are vulnerable and sensitive to comfort may lead digitalization towards an appalling direction, but we may unconsciously find ourselves at home living in a digital universe.  

Monday, November 9, 2009

HW 20

Digitalization is Inevitable

By Amon Ito

 

Technological advancement has been occurring ever since the day a caveman invented a wooden spear. These advancements made life easier, and over time branched off into something we call digitalization. In many cases digitalization is not a problem for countries that lack the money or have not yet hoped on the bandwagon of individuals that enjoy high definition television or first person shooters on some video game console. People observe third-world countries and their standards of living with disgust or pity, but in certain fields we lack the feats to survive. The value of using our five senses to perceive things such as nature and its beauty is decreasing, and the experience of physical interaction is starting to become a burden for some. We are beginning to favor quantity over quality, as seen most often on networking sites such as Facebook or Myspace. So how do we start creating a much stronger bond with reality? I don’t believe that option is available for us anymore. If by any chance we take away the element of technology from our lives, people will become confused and insecure of their situation therefore the advancements must be promoted as it enhances our daily life and keeps us sane. Becoming reliant is a very hazardous route since it requires absolute trust, and we have come to a point where digital technology keeps us alive. The more useful they become the more we utilize, expecting them to be under the control of the human user at all times, and we continue to overlook the fact that electronics do have flaws. They are not tools that can satisfy a person forever, and when they do become advanced enough to gratify our every need, we no longer have control of our physical self and the machines control us. Digitalization is inevitable and will consume a majority of the world with waves of technological advancement. Factual interactions will be substituted by digital representations, diminishing the value of physical interactions.

 

            Alongside the process of evolution, advancement in human intelligence happens. Though we have come to a point where we have not yet shown any physical alterations we surely have grown mentally over the years. Technology is a very accurate way to prove our mental growth ever since we actually became a human. Simple equipment to protect each other such as spears and knives made of wood and stone have become deadly firearms that can instantly pierce through the human flesh. The pace in which we are advancing reassures us that upgraded versions of digital technology will be invented one after another as we tear down boundaries and limitations, but how will the physical body react to this? Even giant industries that make mass amounts of their products to distribute to all the consumers started out as a form of physical labor where physical interaction was necessary, but now factories are mainly run by machines that are capable of working much faster than any man. With this type of mass production, we find ourselves lacking natural resources to compensate for the amount produced and we begin to see a significant decrease in quality and effort put into the construction.

 We see this in most fast food restaurants such as McDonalds and Wendy’s. Starting off as a top quality burger joint, we find ourselves purchasing French fries that consist of chemicals to make it taste like French fries. A McDonald's French fry is one of countless foods whose flavor is just a component in a complex manufacturing process” (Fast Food Nation) The results of over using machines has overwhelmed us with comfort and ease of sitting back and watching mindless programmed electronics do work. Since we started utilizing these machineries, characteristics like laziness in humans began to increase. Before we started relying on machines, being lazy was not an option for survival. Before meals were cooked in microwaves, we were required to endure the daily activity of hunting and cooking just to stay alive. We treasured even the smallest portions of food and valued life more than ever. Now that are standards of daily life have been set to the digital way of life, we live behind barriers and digital representations.

            Though I speak of this digitalization like we are attempting to live life the wrong way, I know that it is also inevitable. After being able to put our hands on an opportunity like digital technology, we will continue to grow.

           

            The emotional aspect while absorbed in the digital world is easily disregarded since the individual’s perspective is switched to the character on the screen. This feeling is called disembodiment, where the individual feels as if they are not inside their body but viewing the world through another person or a digital representation. Knowing how easily we can become entertained by digital technology also shows how vulnerable we are to these machines. “Games like Medal of Honor from WWII, give you "strong feelings of determination, rage, valor, patriotism, and strength because you feel like you are actually serving on the front lines for something you believe in." (Emotions in Videogames). The individual playing the first person shooter Call of Duty genuinely feels as if he is at war. The way videogames manipulate your state of mentality illustrates how deeply it affects our every day life.

            The body cannot live without the mind. Having opinions and judgments are what makes us human, and our ability to evaluate our surroundings help us interact with one another. Imagine a game that manipulates your whole body, similar to The Matrix where the characters “jack in” into the “matrix”, a computer world. If a digital world can control the way we think and feel, it probably will advance enough to make us feel satisfied. Though a life where everything you need or want is brought to you in the matter of seconds would be like a dream come true, there most definitely is a flipside to it. Studies show that the production of technology, which has the capability to interact with our thoughts directly, is being constructed. “Thanks to the rapid pace of research on the BMI, one day these and other individuals may be able to feed themselves with a robotic arm and hand that moves according to their mental commands” (Science Daily). Many significant aspects of the human body are connected to the brain, making that particular organ much more valuable than others. But balance is key in order to maintain a fit both mentally and physically. The easier it is to access and utilize a piece of technology the more we abuse it resulting in less physical labor.

           

            The element of change has a deep impact on the growth of the digital life as well. Change stimulates our mind, as we tend to become unsatisfied with things easily. We demand new things, and this is what keeps companies like Apple busy researching upgrades. The way we hunger for bigger and better things makes the process of reducing the use of technology impossible, and the advancement of technology inevitable. It is in our nature to create new things and as we become smarter little by little, we are mainly becoming smarter in fields that consist of something digital. Video-games these days are open for all ages, whether the player is a young child or a grown man, the gaming industry have made a wide range of games to fit everyone’s needs.  But the amount is not enough to satisfy people for more than couple months.

            The gaming industry is pressured by time due to a high demand in a unique video game, something that no one has ever played. A very big topic that most game designers focus on is the difference between the prequel and the sequel of a game. They capture the consumer’s attention by allowing them to view things that were not possible before, dramatizing how much the two games are different while complimenting the sequel. As long as we have the craving for change, digitalization will prolong.

 

            The invention of these various digital equipment have arguably made our lives easier in terms of communication, social networking, etc. but where do we draw the line? Or will we even be capable of stopping this constant progression? We have ventured deep enough with digitalization to sit back and observe our situation, but nothing can be done to stop it. Most interactions done digitally are mental, drastically lowering the significance of the physical being. Our natural reaction to change and the way we are vulnerable and sensitive to comfort may lead digitalization towards an appalling direction, but we may unconsciously find ourselves at home living in a digital universe.  

HW 19

Dear Hannah 
I love your introduction, and how it flows. Although overall it isn't very long, it definitely has all the elements an introduction needs. The alluring hook at the beginning of your sentence, and your unique wording while describing technology through your perspective.  

I also like how you incorperated real life situations into your argument. Unlike using other quotes from online news articles, it gave me a better understanding of what you are getting at. You also managed to balance out the two perspectives on digital technology, which connects directly back to your thesis.  

Only thing I would like you to improve on is the usage of evidence. Though using real life examples can be very fortifying and can broaden your arguments, I feel that quotes from articles, newspapers, etc. can also be very beneficial in proving your point. Also the length of your conclusion should be longer. It would feel nicer if you had a deeper conclusion since you already have strong arguments.  

So far I'm liking where your paper is headed. Looking forward to reading your final draft! 


Dear Jace I also agree with Hannah. I see that you are trying your best to focus your arguments towards the topic of how we are too connected to cellphones, but I think its best you widen the range of technology to get the most out of your insight on digital technology. The way you utilized the results from the interview assignment is good though. It directly applies to your argument and it should definitely be incorporated into your final draft. The way you connected phone usage to relationships is a good idea, but simply saying we substitute relationships with cellphones is a little much. Unless you have the right information to back up the statement. An alternative you might like to consider is instead of bashing at how bad cellphone usage is, try viewing the topic from both ends like Hannah did. It will help you build length as well as deepen your insight. I hope you can pull it off. Looking forward to seeing the outcome!


HW 5 GHIJK

Dear Hannah

Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you can connect to my insight concerning the digital unit we are currently studying. I see that you aren't necessarily the people who have become consumed with the digital technology that surrounds us, but the fact that you can still see what im trying to say reassures me that I'm still sane and in control of how well I balance my daily daily use of digital technology.

I'm glad you agree with my conclusion since balance is a topic that I strongly believe to be significant. Overall, I feel as if everything should be balanced not just utilizing digital technology, but everything we do. Not stating that everyone needs to be perfect by following this rule, but maintaining balance allows you to get the best of both worlds.

I also understand how you feel when friends don't really approve of not watching enough TV. For approximately two years I have not watched TV, and I feel comfortable with how I live...my friends don't. I find myself lost when they talk about recent television shows, but at the same time I feel good that I havent wasted time absorbed in media.

It seems like you are conscious of your semi-dependency of digital tools like your cellphone and Ipod. The fact that they are portable makes them very convenient unlike the TV which requires you to stay in a certain location. If TVs were to be installed into cellphones or Ipods, I'd be a more active TV watcher than I am now.

I think fear is an element that we both share to be significant. Knowing that we both understand the concept of fearing how advanced digital technology has become, I wonder why people rely so heavily on it? My answer for now is that is has become a necesity to survive in a society like the one we currently live in. Thank you again for the insightful comment.

HW 4

Dear Hannah

I really enjoy how your post is simple and gets to the point quickly. Though you didn't write a lot, I can definitely understand your insight on the evolution of technology within our lives. I also concur with your opinion on how people want to be seen. Its never really about what is inside, but the reputation one gets out of what they have and their values.

I would like to dig deeply within the concept of a fantasy created around a real human being. Unlike interacting with one another face to face, IMing and other social networking sites allow you to hide various aspects which makes you who you are. I can definitely see how it can gradually impact the individual's consciousness of his/her true self over time.

The conversation you had with your friends Alice really does illustrate how we have changed as humans in such a short period of time. When physical interaction and even the most complex procedures was a norm before the invention of cellphones. It also helped build true friendship and stronger bonds between one another.

I have to come back to your first sentence on this one. I would love to hear more about your personal opinion on how we live in a fantasy world. For example: Do you currently pursuit a lifestyle where you are true to others? Or maybe you are unconsciously hiding behind the privacy social networking offers? I can honestly say that I hide various truths from people around me, only allowing people truly close to me see behind all the fashion and technology that cloaks me.

Your perspective makes me realize my flaws, and how I secretly rely on what the digital life offers. The way my digital life halts me from expressing feelings caged deep inside. How reputation within the community can make me act in ways that I personally may not think is righteous.

Overall, great post. From the beginning of the post to the very end, it really escalated my understanding of a perspective on digital life in which I have not thought of.

P.S. Thanks for the comment on my post. Im glad you can connect to my thoughts on how technology impacts us humans.

Thursday, November 5, 2009

HW #18

            Technological advancement has been occurring ever since the day a caveman invented a wooden spear. These advancements made life easier, and over time branched off into something we call digitalization. In many cases digitalization is not a problem for countries that lack the money or have not yet hoped on the bandwagon of individuals that enjoy high definition television or first person shooters on some video game console. People observe third-world countries and their standards of living with disgust or pity, but in certain fields we lack the feats to survive. The value of using our five senses to perceive things such as nature and its beauty is decreasing, and the experience of physical interaction is starting to become a burden for some. We are beginning to favor quantity over quality, as seen most often on networking sites such as Facebook or Myspace. So how do we start creating a much stronger bond with reality? I don’t believe that option is available for us anymore. If by any chance we take away the element of technology from our lives, people will become confused and insecure of their situation therefore the advancements must be promoted as it enhances our daily life and keeps us sane. Becoming reliant is a very hazardous route since it requires absolute trust, and we have come to a point where digital technology keeps us alive. The more useful they become the more we utilize, expecting them to be under the control of the human user at all times, and we continue to overlook the fact that electronics do have flaws. They are not tools that can satisfy a person forever, and when they do become advanced enough to gratify our every need, we no longer have control of our physical self and the machines control us. Digitalization is inevitable and will consume a majority of the world with waves of technological advancement. Factual interactions will be substituted by digital representations, diminishing the value of the physical body.

 

            Alongside the process of evolution, advancement in human intelligence happens. Though we have come to a point where we have not yet shown any physical alterations we surely have grown mentally over the years. Technology is a very accurate way to prove our mental growth ever since we actually became a human. Simple equipment to protect each other such as spears and knives made of wood and stone have become deadly firearms that can instantly pierce through the human flesh. The pace in which we are advancing reassures us that upgraded versions of digital technology will be invented one after another as we tear down boundaries and limitations, but how will the physical body react to this? Even giant industries that make mass amounts of their products to distribute to all the consumers started out as a form of physical labor where physical interaction was necessary, but now factories are mainly run by machines that are capable of working much faster than any man. With this type of mass production, we find ourselves lacking natural resources to compensate for the amount produced and we begin to see a significant decrease in quality and effort put into the construction.

 We see this in most fast food restaurants such as McDonalds and Wendy’s. Starting off as a top quality burger joint, we find ourselves purchasing French fries that consist of chemicals to make it taste like French fries.” A McDonald's French fry is one of countless foods whose flavor is just a component in a complex manufacturing process” (Fast Food Nation) The results of over using machines has overwhelmed us with comfort and ease of sitting back and watching mindless programmed electronics do work. Since we started utilizing these machineries, characteristics like laziness in humans began to increase. Before we started relying on machines, being lazy was not an option for survival. Before meals were cooked in microwaves, we were required to endure the daily activity of hunting and cooking just to stay alive. We treasured even the smallest portions of food and valued life more than ever. Now that are standards of daily life have been set to the digital way of life, we live behind barriers and digital representations.

            Though I speak of this digitalization like we are attempting to live life the wrong way, I know that it is also inevitable. After being able to put our hands on an opportunity like digital technology, we will continue to grow.

           

            The feeling while absorbed in the digital world is easily disregarded since the person feeling it does not realize it. This feeling is called disembodiment, where the individual feels as if they are not inside their body but viewing the world through another person or a digital representation. Knowing how easily we can become entertained by digital technology also shows how vulnerable we are to these machines. “Games like Medal of Honor from WWII, give you "strong feelings of determination, rage, valor, patriotism, and strength because you feel like you are actually serving on the front lines for something you believe in." (Emotions in Videogames). The individual playing the first person shooter Call of Duty genuinely feels as if he is at war. The way videogames manipulate your state of mentality illustrates how deeply it affects our every day life.

            The body cannot live without the mind. Having opinions and judgments are what makes us human, and our ability to evaluate our surroundings help us interact with one another. Imagine a game that manipulates your whole body, similar to The Matrix where the characters “jack in” into the “matrix”, a computer world. If a digital world can control the way we think and feel, it probably will advance enough to make us feel satisfied. Though a life where everything you need or want is brought to you in the matter of seconds would be like a dream come true, there most definitely is a flipside to it. Studies show that the production of technology, which has the capability to interact with our thoughts directly, is being constructed. “Thanks to the rapid pace of research on the BMI, one day these and other individuals may be able to feed themselves with a robotic arm and hand that moves according to their mental commands” (Science Daily). Many significant aspects of the human body are connected to the brain, making that particular organ much more valuable than others. But balance is key in order to maintain a fit both mentally and physically. The easier it is to access and utilize a piece of technology the more we abuse it resulting in less physical labor.

           

            The element of change has a deep impact on the growth of the digital life as well. Change stimulates our mind, as we tend to become unsatisfied with things easily. We demand new things, and this is what keeps companies like Apple busy researching upgrades. The way we hunger for bigger and better things makes the process of reducing the use of technology impossible, and the advancement of technology inevitable. It is in our nature to create new things and as we become smarter little by little, we are mainly becoming smarter in fields that consist of something digital. Video-games these days are open for all ages, whether the player is a young child or a grown man, the gaming industry have made a wide range of games to fit everyone’s needs.  But the amount is not enough to satisfy people for more than couple months.

 The gaming industry is pressured by time due to a high demand in a unique video game, something that no one has ever played. A very big topic that most game designers focus on is the difference between the prequel and the sequel of a game. They capture the consumer’s attention by allowing them to view things that were not possible before, dramatizing how much the two games are different while complimenting the sequel. As long as we have the craving for change, digitalization will prolong.

 

            The invention of these various digital equipment have arguably made our lives easier in terms of communication, social networking, etc. but where do we draw the line? Or will we even be capable of stopping this constant progression? We have ventured deep enough with digitalization to sit back and observe our situation, but nothing can be done to stop it. Most interactions done digitally are mental, drastically lowering the significance of the physical being. Our natural reaction to change and the way we are vulnerable and sensitive to comfort may lead digitalization towards an appalling direction, but we may unconsciously find ourselves at home living in a digital universe.  

Tuesday, November 3, 2009

HW #17

Hannah

Its hard to determine if your arguments are good enough without a thesis to connect back to, but knowing you I'm sure you'll be able to construct one based off all the evidence you will be using throughout your paper. 
Also you don't know how much of a headache I got from trying to analyze the meaning of your EQ. Definitely not saying its not a good one, but I couldn't make much sense of what your getting at. So I'm looking forward to observe how you are gonna pull it off. If you can answer this question it'd be great: "If our consciousness is a representation, then what is reality?". 
I see that overall, you try to reference the usefulness of technology and luxury of having it around us. I like how your focusing on it since I also am, but in a different way so it fits right in with my thesis. 

One thing that I still feel confused about is where you will be fitting in the theory that our consciousness is a representation. I see that you are going to talk about romanticism, but I'm still not seeing how it can completely cover as an answer for a question as big as "Is it partly because our consciousness is itself a kind of representation of reality?". 
Regardless Im looking forward to the outcome of your paper.
Good Luck!


Jace

I'd like you to organize the thesis and arguments. I think its going to be hard to write a whole paper based on one specific piece of technology, but it seems like you are loaded with information based on cellphone usage. I also like that you are connecting our connection with our phones to relationships with our lovers. It helps us make connections while deepening our insight. I'd just like to see all of this in a organized format, and also your thesis that you will be writing your paper on. I personally wouldn't be able to write a whole paper on cellphones, but it seems like you have a deeper judgement about it being a problem than me, so I'm looking forward to hearing your thoughts.


HW #16 Outline

Thesis: Digitalization is inevitable and will consume a majority of the world with waves of technological advancement. Factual interactions will be substituted by digital representations, diminishing the value of the physical body.

Argument 1: Technological advancement resides amongst human evolution, therefore technology will overwhelm physical labor.

Human Evolution: Ever since we were cavemen, we have tried to pursue shortcuts that can make our lives easier. Alongside the evolution of the body, our minds grow more intelligent craving change. (Online Research) 

History of Tools: Comparing the past to present. Everything Bad is Good for You

Argument 2: Without the mind the body cannot live. If technology can manipulate the way we think and feel, it can satisfy us for eternity. Compare Physical vs. Mental.

Wall-E: This disney flick interprets us humans to become physically unfit after relying heavily to technology. 

New technology: http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2007/11/071107210708.htm
New forms of technology can be controlled by just thinking? If this is possible, we may find a way to control all our personal belongings by thought. This reduces the amount of actual physical labor.

Argument 3: Change stimulates us and keeps us entertained. We will forever be unsatisfied with what we have and assume something new will sweep us off our feet. Technology is in high demand by people all around the world, so it will continue to become bigger and better... as we see it at least.

Electronics: Technology such as video games are treasured by people of all ages. Since the development of the first video game system, or the first television, most things have become affordable and the population of people owning these electronics have increased. Companies that come up with the new entertainment systems will have to constantly think up something new.